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1 Zeλ(Misplaced Modifiers)

ӢZchZͬͬһZھӲͬλӵĺx׃@һcЇW]ҕ Ҫ`⡣1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.

betterλò(yng)ھĩ

2 Ӳ(Sentence Fragments)

ڿZHpɽքZĵȣľȫԱǕZͲͬӽY(ji)(gu)˼_@Nrl(f)䌑ԺPЩafrl(f)

1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TVradionewspaper and so on.

벿“for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on”һľHһЩB؞~Zܪɾ䡣

Ğ飺There are many ways to know societyfor exampleby TVradioand newspaper.

3 ҴZ(Dangling Modifiers)

^ҴZָ׵ĶZcӵ߉݋P(gun)ϵy磺At the age of tenmy grandfather died. @“at the age of ten” ֻcʮqr]f“ l”ʮqrһmy grandfather ҂@ҴZ_һcȫͲôM

Ğ飺When I was tenmy grandfather died.

1. To do well in collegegood grades are essential.

вʽZ “to do well in college” ߉݋Z

Ğ飺To do well in college a student needs good grades

4~`(Misuse of Parts of Speech)

“~`”F(xin)飺~~;~~;~~õ

1. None can negative the importance of money.

negative ϵ~`~

Ğ飺None can deny the importance of money.

5ָ(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)

ָҪvǴ~cָ˻P(gun)ϵ壬ȺõĴ~һԇ@һ䣺

Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.

(ҽҪҪİ)x@һԒxߟo_ДλlY(ji)l҂`Ĵ~ָ_˼һĿȻ@ӿɸĞ飺

Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

1. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.

˷Q~we ͷ~yourselfָһ¡

Ğ飺We can also know society by serving it ourselves.

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