寫求職信的目的在于獲得職位，一封求職信無論如何文辭并茂，令人心動，公司HR主管不見到應(yīng)聘者本人是不會給予工作機會的。因此，求職信的實際目的在于獲得面談的機會。許多人都會copy網(wǎng)上的求職信范本，導(dǎo)致千篇一律，這是非常不可取的。我們已經(jīng)講過怎樣寫求職信，這次我們來談?wù)勄舐毿艑懽髦腥菀妆缓雎缘募?xì)節(jié)問題。

　　一、求職信的第一段說明寫信的目的，有些專家認(rèn)為不宜用分詞句子，比如用下面的句子做開頭，因為這樣的句子被人用得大多，顯得陳腐，失去特點。

　　Replying to your advertisement...
　　Answering your advertisement...
　　Believing that there is an opportunity...
　　Thinking that there is a vacancy in your company...
　　Having read your ad...

　　再比較下面三組例句。每一組里面(1)句較差，經(jīng)過修改后(2)句顯得比較恰當(dāng)。

　　A:
　　(1) Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager.
　　(2) I am applying for the position of sales manager. I believe my qualifications will meet your exacting requirements.

　　B:
　　(1) I believe after reading your advertisement in this morning's Journal that you are offering just the opportunity I am looking for.
　　(2) Your advertisement in this morning's Journal for an adjustment manager prompted me to apply for this position.

　　C:
　　(1) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.
　　(2) In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. Please consider me an applicant for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this work.